Plain Language Defined
Plain language is a sister discipline to usability. The most widely accepted definition of plain language goes like this --
Writing in plain language means writing so your intended audience can
find:
- what they need
- understand it, and
- use it to fulfill their needs.
Sound familiar? I’ve had usability folks tell me that’s exactly how they define usability.
So it puzzles me when I see a site that someone has obviously designed with care that’s full of confusing content, obscure headings and links, and content that doesn’t address the reader’s concerns. Why go to the trouble to develop an effective design if you fill it with junk?
Let’s look at an example.
I looked at a page about the US Census, entitled “Questions You May Have.” The title is followed by a list of questions with answers. Here’s one pair:
Is there another way to get the form other than the mail?
Be Counted forms are census forms that are available at various community locations for use by people who either did not receive a form in the mail or whose information was not collected on any other form. Be Counted forms are available in English, Spanish, Chinese, Korean, Vietnamese and Russian. These forms can be picked up in various community locations and mailed back in the attached postage-paid envelope.
So what’s wrong with this?
First, it includes a lot of information the question (and supposedly the questioner) didn’t ask. And as is common in the government’s writing, it fails to address the reader. Most importantly, it doesn’t answer the question, except to give the vague instruction to pick up a form at a “community location.” What’s a community location?
Why didn’t they just say:
Yes. You can pick up a form and a postage-paid return envelope at your local post office. That would have saved a lot of space, and served the reader’s needs more effectively.
Examples like this are multiplied hundreds of thousands of times on federal web sites. If you care enough to test the usability of your design, why not test the readability and usefulness of your content as well?
Annetta Cheek Bio:
Dr. Cheek received a PhD in Anthropology from the
